passes by me.
In the eerie evening of autumn,
The trees swirl for me to see
Their dancing in felicity,
the delectation all along,
The leaves swinging in motion,
In the melody of the song.
Whilst the clouds above wait,
In the rhythm of the song they flow;
Darkness descends amidst them,
To shatter rain below.
The tiny droplets,
Are they cheer or pain?
Why do clouds weep
Down the lane?
As the cool breeze touches past me,
And I stand there by-
All relish the pelt
It is just I who sighs.
The silhouette of my anguish
is created by the rain;
The portrait is clear,
But none understand- all in vain!
3 comments:
beautiful..!!!!!...makes me wanna cry..!!!...*sob* *sob*
No..bt seriously rily amazin..!!!!.... I am sick & tired of sayin this bt 4 ur sake...i'll say it again..!!..u rock sweetie & u dnt need a comment 2 tel u how good you are...
hi this is trisha, we met today (right?????) anyway i read your blog, and i've become quite a fan. i like the library period one a lot, you're good at humour apparently! leave me a comment occasionally, and let me know when you've posted something new, ok? love your work! ciao
loved the poem...very nicely written and the best part is that it seems 2 b in a spur of moment that u change the way one feels abt the rains falling down....nice work gal...u r wasting time studying science...ur place is with me in english...ur poem reminded me of certain lines frm macbeth--" life is but a walking shadow, a poor player....full of sound and fury signifying nothing" go girl...:)
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